Language is a crucial part to life, both socially and physically. You might think language cant be physical, well it can. You reading this post right now you are using your inner voice, all of your inner thoughts come from your inner voice. If you never were to have learned how to talk how would … [Read more…]
NaySayer Paragraph: Some people may say that art cannot help to break the stigma around mental health and that it wouldn’t help to make people comfortable talking about their illness however this is not the case. YoYo Ma explains the divide between the two neural pathways in our brain that divide critical and empathic thinking, … [Read more…]
I decided to read my narrative intro because I feel as though that was my weakest paragraph in my paper. I noticed that I rely heavily on pointing terms, feel pointing terms can be helpful but not when overused because then it becomes confusing. I am using too many pointing terms to the point where … [Read more…]
My peers gave me a lot of corrections that I wouldn’t have noticed otherwise, I find that oftentimes things make complete sense to me when I’m typing my essay and even after when I am rereading but the peer review helps greatly because it’s a new pair of eyes looking at my paper. Marie pointed … [Read more…]
