Language is a crucial part to life, both socially and physically. You might think language cant be physical, well it can. You reading this post right now you are using your inner voice, all of your inner thoughts come from your inner voice. If you never were to have learned how to talk how would … [Read more…]
NaySayer Paragraph: Some people may say that art cannot help to break the stigma around mental health and that it wouldn’t help to make people comfortable talking about their illness however this is not the case. YoYo Ma explains the divide between the two neural pathways in our brain that divide critical and empathic thinking, … [Read more…]
I decided to read my narrative intro because I feel as though that was my weakest paragraph in my paper. I noticed that I rely heavily on pointing terms, feel pointing terms can be helpful but not when overused because then it becomes confusing. I am using too many pointing terms to the point where … [Read more…]
My peers gave me a lot of corrections that I wouldn’t have noticed otherwise, I find that oftentimes things make complete sense to me when I’m typing my essay and even after when I am rereading but the peer review helps greatly because it’s a new pair of eyes looking at my paper. Marie pointed … [Read more…]
I decided to reread Becks article because I felt that going back into his argument after having read Strawsons, which are opposing argument I would be able to have a clear view of the both of the arguments. Strawson and Beck have very different but oddly similar ways of approaching their arguments, they are both … [Read more…]
I think that this piece has a very profound way of looking at the use of narratives to describe a life, my personal feelings is that you shouldn’t force yourself to live your life as if you are living a narrative, I feel then you force yourself to be ingenue. I feel like the same … [Read more…]
I think one area I really need to strengthen myself on is organization. In order to do this I will break down my paper into main ideas and work to organize main ideas and points together. My next point on the rubric that I need to work on is topic sentences and hooks. I will … [Read more…]
