I think one area I really need to strengthen myself on is organization. In order to do this I will break down my paper into main ideas and work to organize main ideas and points together.
My next point on the rubric that I need to work on is topic sentences and hooks. I will think about what is interesting, possibly a fact to hook my audience into my paper.
The next thing I need to work on is better introducing my authors that I use quotes from. To do this I will explain who they are and the context behind their writing and why they are significant to the paper.
Lastly what I can do to strengthen my paper is make a more clear claim statement, while I address my point of view I feel that I don’t have a clear sentence that states what my claim is.
