I decided to read my narrative intro because I feel as though that was my weakest paragraph in my paper. I noticed that I rely heavily on pointing terms, feel pointing terms can be helpful but not when overused because then it becomes confusing. I am using too many pointing terms to the point where it is hard to follow what I am talking about because on point term just points to another. I think this is something I can work on along with using more key terms and words that catch attention, especially because its my intro paragraph I want to catch my readers attention and interesting key words is a way I can do this.
